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well ill tell ya this. The whole emo scene is old

Im sure you know what obvious flaws there are so i wont rub your face in it.

while there was moderate thought into this its too little too late.
What i mean is the emo make fun of scene is old now. Sure theyre still annoying but get with the times thats all.

Now as for real criticism the artwork was ridiculously sketchy, not sure if that was the point.

I see some techniques used like the letter reading animation. BUT it was kinda ruined by the over sketchy art.

As a tip, out line smooth lines in black or really dark colours. REALLY dark.

anyhow dont give up good luck next time

D-noob responds:

I am wery happy for your comment ;)
but it's like this, it's not a joke:

I had an task in my Multimedia course to do a first try flash movie about an emo girl.
So i had no choice but to do a flash movie about an emo girl...of ya know what i mean..
and this took me 2 weeks... got A+

My next project is going to be a LOT of better!
You will see what it is, and i even got an half a year to finish it
thanx for the comment ;)

Awesome ive been saying this for years

just never thought to make a cartoon about it.

I know Ive gotten people saying im unoriginal, than i ask them a for suggestions.
what do i get? "how about a toad or snake summon like in naruto"

naru-fucking-to... What i just quoted was the very definition of unoriginal.

Now off my rant. This could have standed to be better animated or drawn, but so could anything. The art and animation served the poin and I stay firm on the fact that graphics deserve a 9/10 here.

The voicing was decent and also served the cause. I only ask if you could make it somewhat louder. small request.

And the humor, its decently funny and again points out what has driven me nuts for years. good job

ironically 80% of the people who voted 5 on this were probably the fat anime dorks you have been pretty much making fun of the whole time.

anyhow this is 4.5/5 material. But since there is no 4.5 button i rounded up to 5.

I hope that in the future You adress other issues.

but i love the stand point. Cant stand working for months on a game that gets a mere 3.7/5 than have someones week of work surpass it cause it makes popculture references to whatever anime or game is popular at the time.

one finally thought. DUDE the gay ass face curve.... I agree whole heartedly and have been put into propetual states of WHAAA by it.

Huh , that last review didnt attack anyone

I am not sure who said what but pease get better audio
I couldnt really understand things and please draw your animations better , you had a goood little cartoon thats for sure

Maybe you made it a little late , like 3 or 4 years ago would have worked great because I think yugioh is off the air now , for good reason too such a crapppy overdramatic show I mean OVERDRAMATIC!!!!!

and I know you can agree , but whats worse is people still attempt pokemon paradies pokemon rocked give em a break come freaking on sure its cheesit but hey its one of nintendo's biggest profit source

Now that I am done ranting , I know you can improve hope to see more just please work on the audio

PS it isnt expensive to fix audio if you can afford flash , you can afford a 30 dollar mic who ever said good audio is expensive

Ciao

damnit

You just used FU2's main theme before I got to , I knew that winter should not have submitted so soon

Anyhow it was some what cool(now I am talking about your cartoon) but its really incomplete , you could have had something if only you didnt make it so damn short and compress the audio next time , there was way too much load for this short clip

it pains me to see poor quality

Its not that I dont like you , Its not that I dont like your cartoon
its the fact that uh hmmm

well tell me you didnt honestly expect a high rating right? the graphics were choppy oh who am I kidding the graphics were horrid (just being honest) and well is this not a direct insult to another cartoon ? thats not right
your lucky that this has a low score because , who ever it was that made "all NG fags must die" would tear on you instantly

Id say keep up the good and hard work but its not hard to bitch about other peoples work

overall you get points for almost nothing

come on man come on
Its bad enough that Ill will gets away with the rants
( I am not saying that foamy is bad either) just saying that flash cartoons that are not fully animated dont deserve full credit

rexCo responds:

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This is really awesome , yup

I liked it a lot not just because of each sole good thing but because it's different from the usually and it has a good ammount of evereythng Good Job

good job

I enjoyed it and in the end isn't that all that matters?

Great job Aussie

Oi I watched this on phrozenflame it was great :)
Keep it up and enjoi your winter

Blackan responds:

only thing that's missing is the Snow XD Thanks Dizimz

meh , no real point to it

I see effort , though the graphics were sketchy , especially at the end at the canyon with the woot anywho I will vote 3 , I have seen way better and way worse

george-berry responds:

yeah, i can see what you mean. Ive got better animations in the pipeline, just i wanted to finish this.

whoa trippy

It amused me , so you , good job
Though the graphix were some what sketchy

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