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Latest Flash Reviews
"Im gonna be honest but not cruel okay?"
basically this isnt good at all but a 3.21 is a reasonable score for it. I have made things bad that have scored too well as well.
You know yourself the animation is crappy "i know the animation is crappy, but i dont care" and yet the audience themselves denies it lol
Is naruto that much of a big deal that all logic and dignity must be put aside?
andyhow its not bad if youre new to flash.
there are a lot of things you need to know first. I imagine since youre moderately decent at drawing naru characters , youre probably more than just a little into it.
I personally am not but i wont rip on it...Not in this review anyways hehe.
Anyhow I imagine that if this were something less religious (seeing as naruto is a fanboy religion thesedays) it may have scored less.
The reason i only gave a 3/10 is because like you said you made it outta boredom.
but the guy before me, no offence to you is a moron or something. It definetly doesnt deserve a 10/10.
and it definetly deserves higher than a 3/10 judging on effort. Its too bad effort doesnt earn you much on newgrounds these days. A year of work in a game gets less respect than a videogame parody that took 5 hours tops to make.
what im saying is, dont let yourself fall off the horse, and maybe make a non naruto related flash seeing as it is kinda done. ( i saw your other 2 were related)
A little tip - try using stream to better sync mouth movements.
And for mouth movements realize that there is a great number of frames for each position of the jaw,tongue and upper teeth for mouth movements.
For instance when saying a word with strong L's your tongue touches your top teeth, or Strong O's has your mouth more puckered.
When animating mouth movements, please animate the eyebrows and eyes as well. a few hand gestures here and there helps greatly as well
good luck in the future
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"I get the jokes :P, im not rofling but its a lol"
heres some criticism though to help you build as an animator.
Alot of drawings were nice. and others, seemed like fish out of water. all in all this seemed more like a rush and a lack of real effort.
I also cant help but think this scored a bit higher than norm due to the naruto allusion.
No offense though.
Its as that other flash said, 2 things always get over rated, anime in any way shape or form, and poorly drawn game parodies.
and i honestly think this was done in a few hours.
For humor you got something there, id say 9/10 cause bombchus piss me off.
But due to inconsistant graphics and a rushed feel, graphics get a 6/10
sound wasnt bad either, 8/10
violence - not sure what to put, link got blown up but that happens in a E rated game so, 5/10 (this isnt an important category)
interactivity - 0/10 - its a movie , obviously.
I know ill get rated bad or as abusive in this but it honestly isnt my goal. Im just trying to say that i know you can do better timon1771,
And remember with flashes like these. your score isnt based on your skill but with how much naruto and bleach and random game related jokes can be put in.
Hell i honestly believe that if you oput a naruto related object or clip in anything it will do well enough.
Again no offense , just me trying to tell ya how things work
I did moderately like this flash though :P
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"well i agree with the message almost entirely"
Yes global warming seems to be happening. or so that prick gore tells us.
i havent noticed it getting hotter.
in fact the hottest year was 1998, 10 years ago huh, so what are we approaching an iceage?
anyhow i like the message and the character.
I will adress the people. Ethenal is a environmental and economic catastrophe.
to make ethanol wed have to plowdown rainforests, forests and wetlands
destroying the animals and environment you ethanol lovers wanna protect.
Its cost is nuts and is a net negative economically.
ethanol is bullshit.
Global Warming Im 50% sure is bullshit
The earth goes through trends. 40 years ago, melting the icecaps were encouraged cause we thought we were in a cooling faze (we were in fact)
but algores ignorant. And his leftist followers are morons. who never heard of the global cooling crisis back in the 70s.
I mean that concert he threw for GW awareness. what a dick. THE LAST THING THE WORLD NEEDS IS ANOTHER CONCERT.
Watch penn and tellers bullshit. check out the internet skeptics site.
these guys dig for facts. find real scientists with real studies. And further more unlike the politics who tell us to either save the world or make more money,
these guys passionately work and study the facts.
Remember politics arent scientists. And A failed polition like Al fucking Gore is certainly not a scientist. Hes just a loser who cant step down from the public eye gracefully.
If i were him id shut up cause hes really getting annoying now. Scaring our naive citizens cause he doesnt want his 15 minutes of fame to end
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Latest Audio Reviews
"awesome i had this tune stuck in my head"
sine i was up last night for like 4 hours catching the legendaries for my ladyfriend :P
about the tune. I love the baseline to it but i like the base in most pokemon tunes.
keep up the good covers
may i ask if you have a midi of this tune?
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I love how its widely assumed that everyone on the internet knows what shippuden is. Its naruto but 3 years in the future. I call it naruto "cash In"
Since its the same repetative scenerio just theyre a bit taller. I watched a few episodes cause i was told it makes up for all of narutos short comings.And Im always willing to give a "good" animation a chance. It didnt though I was sour.
ah well ya cant complain, narutos already more popular than god.
Anyhow i like this track it would be good in a futuristic board riding game i have been working on (off again on again)
keep making more like this please.
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I dunno why im reviewing on Newgrounds :P
I already told you i liked it.
FYI , people better not use this for there own stuff, unless its totally worth it :P
.if peeps use it and its like a dbz stick fight or something stupid..... you lose all respect
Author's Response:
RAWR!
I wonder how long it'll be before someone uses it in a DBZ stickfight. :p
Btw, <3.
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