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Location: Canada - Halifax NS
Job: Artist/student
Dizimz is Now "GyroScopic Games"
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"not bad here is some constructive criticism."
first off your choice in music. FFX to zanarken?
well its a cool tune but as of now it is so overused its not funny. that soaks your originality.
on the scene where it zooms out from the train. it is disperportionate to the rest of the environment. nothing big just ruins what could be a good scene.
the japanese kanji. I gotta ask. did you use japanese font and simply type " dual arms" with it. if so that title kanji is more than likely incorrect.
also the obscure text being used. (japanese kanji probably), do you understand it yourself. Probably not right?
So maybe not do the japanese text. It can look cool but in this case it was tacky.
The rest is decent. Nothing i can criticise directly. Just keep practicing.
and maybe change your username. to something other than RPGsROK. just me being picky, take no offense. Keep it as is. Just try to develop a more recognisable name. thats all
good times.
yours truely Dizimz
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reviewing. Yours was the lowest score, but the most constructive. I'll address your issues one by one.
I wasn't aware that "To Zanarkand" in particular was overused. Where have you heard it (other than in FFX)? I am aware, however, that "Misirlou" isn't the most original tune out there. Still, do you imply I should go for more obscure songs? That's fine actually, (but I have no experience in recording original tracks).
I know exactly what your talking about with the disproportions with the train. I'll fix that (maybe upload a new version later. . .) as best I can.
Okay, I admit to taking the semi-random kanji for the reservoir thing in the end, but I am proud to say the the Dual Arms "katakana" was translated by me personally, into the phonetic "dyuuru aamusu" as it should be. Nonetheless, I'll certainly refrain from writing stuff I really don't know in the future.
Finally, I agree that RPGsROK isn't the greatest name ever but I wasn't aware we could still change our usernames. If you can, please PM me if only to tell me how (could've sworn you couldn't change names since the site upgrade. . .)
Thanks a lot, the review was very helpful. (PS, Fear Unlimited 2 is awesome, keep it up)
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"submit to youtube but not here"
Im sorry this sites for FLASH animations not movies.
Im sure soem was flash but youre invading our territory. Dont.
Author's Response:
I already did post them to youtube and knox does this kinda stuff too and he has created a big following. I mean there's even a claymation section in the archives and what not. So as of now claymation is considered a type of flash thanks to Knox and his Blue Klaymen.
-faceofdoomness
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"well ill tell ya this. The whole emo scene is old"
Im sure you know what obvious flaws there are so i wont rub your face in it.
while there was moderate thought into this its too little too late.
What i mean is the emo make fun of scene is old now. Sure theyre still annoying but get with the times thats all.
Now as for real criticism the artwork was ridiculously sketchy, not sure if that was the point.
I see some techniques used like the letter reading animation. BUT it was kinda ruined by the over sketchy art.
As a tip, out line smooth lines in black or really dark colours. REALLY dark.
anyhow dont give up good luck next time
Author's Response:
I am wery happy for your comment ;)
but it's like this, it's not a joke:
I had an task in my Multimedia course to do a first try flash movie about an emo girl.
So i had no choice but to do a flash movie about an emo girl...of ya know what i mean..
and this took me 2 weeks... got A+
My next project is going to be a LOT of better!
You will see what it is, and i even got an half a year to finish it
thanx for the comment ;)
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Its not that I dont like you , Its not that I dont like your cartoon
its the fact that uh hmmm
well tell me you didnt honestly expect a high rating right? the graphics were choppy oh who am I kidding the graphics were horrid (just being honest) and well is this not a direct insult to another cartoon ? thats not right
your lucky that this has a low score because , who ever it was that made "all NG fags must die" would tear on you instantly
Id say keep up the good and hard work but its not hard to bitch about other peoples work
overall you get points for almost nothing
come on man come on
Its bad enough that Ill will gets away with the rants
( I am not saying that foamy is bad either) just saying that flash cartoons that are not fully animated dont deserve full credit
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Oi I watched this on phrozenflame it was great :)
Keep it up and enjoi your winter
Author's Response:
only thing that's missing is the Snow XD Thanks Dizimz
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I see effort , though the graphics were sketchy , especially at the end at the canyon with the woot anywho I will vote 3 , I have seen way better and way worse
Author's Response:
yeah, i can see what you mean. Ive got better animations in the pipeline, just i wanted to finish this.
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though I dont like sound boards , but to be fair this was a half decent one I hope it doesn't get blammed or any crappy reviews
good luck with any future flash projects
Author's Response:
it does have crappy reviews but its passing! ty man!
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Besides the leap of faith , does mullen ever actually fall????????
really though I am not talking about little falls but like credit carding himself from a laser flip or face planting or something anyway great flash
Author's Response:
Who the fuck doesnt. Except it would kind of be hard to credit card on a flatground fliptrick. Stationary.
~Jestar <3
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it hs its humor though I only saw about three episodes of that crappy show anyways , though I had about 70 cards and about 25 of them were shiney , point being whoever invented yugioh owes me about 35 dollars
Author's Response:
Ok. This is quite possibly the strangest review I hace ever got.... Thanks for the 10 in humor... I try to look for the positives....
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the beginning was impressive , when the guy in armor killed the other guy. but then , then it got a little ugly , some of the graphics were too sketchy. thus it doesn't leave a good first impression.
however it was good , but remember , when you make the full movie or game , note to make the graphics better. after all graphics do determine the quality
Author's Response:
yeah I know, thats one of the reasons I quit it... it started to go downhill, badly...
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