Score: 3

"Im gonna be honest but not cruel okay?"

submission: Naruto Surfing Usa!!!

date: December 13, 2007

basically this isnt good at all but a 3.21 is a reasonable score for it. I have made things bad that have scored too well as well.

You know yourself the animation is crappy "i know the animation is crappy, but i dont care" and yet the audience themselves denies it lol

Is naruto that much of a big deal that all logic and dignity must be put aside?

andyhow its not bad if youre new to flash.

there are a lot of things you need to know first. I imagine since youre moderately decent at drawing naru characters , youre probably more than just a little into it.

I personally am not but i wont rip on it...Not in this review anyways hehe.

Anyhow I imagine that if this were something less religious (seeing as naruto is a fanboy religion thesedays) it may have scored less.

The reason i only gave a 3/10 is because like you said you made it outta boredom.

but the guy before me, no offence to you is a moron or something. It definetly doesnt deserve a 10/10.

and it definetly deserves higher than a 3/10 judging on effort. Its too bad effort doesnt earn you much on newgrounds these days. A year of work in a game gets less respect than a videogame parody that took 5 hours tops to make.

what im saying is, dont let yourself fall off the horse, and maybe make a non naruto related flash seeing as it is kinda done. ( i saw your other 2 were related)

A little tip - try using stream to better sync mouth movements.
And for mouth movements realize that there is a great number of frames for each position of the jaw,tongue and upper teeth for mouth movements.

For instance when saying a word with strong L's your tongue touches your top teeth, or Strong O's has your mouth more puckered.

When animating mouth movements, please animate the eyebrows and eyes as well. a few hand gestures here and there helps greatly as well

good luck in the future

Score: 7

"I get the jokes :P, im not rofling but its a lol"

submission: Link Gets Hurt Once Again

date: December 9, 2007

heres some criticism though to help you build as an animator.

Alot of drawings were nice. and others, seemed like fish out of water. all in all this seemed more like a rush and a lack of real effort.

I also cant help but think this scored a bit higher than norm due to the naruto allusion.

No offense though.

Its as that other flash said, 2 things always get over rated, anime in any way shape or form, and poorly drawn game parodies.

and i honestly think this was done in a few hours.

For humor you got something there, id say 9/10 cause bombchus piss me off.

But due to inconsistant graphics and a rushed feel, graphics get a 6/10

sound wasnt bad either, 8/10

violence - not sure what to put, link got blown up but that happens in a E rated game so, 5/10 (this isnt an important category)

interactivity - 0/10 - its a movie , obviously.

I know ill get rated bad or as abusive in this but it honestly isnt my goal. Im just trying to say that i know you can do better timon1771,

And remember with flashes like these. your score isnt based on your skill but with how much naruto and bleach and random game related jokes can be put in.

Hell i honestly believe that if you oput a naruto related object or clip in anything it will do well enough.

Again no offense , just me trying to tell ya how things work

I did moderately like this flash though :P

Score: 10

"well i agree with the message almost entirely"

submission: Global Warming?

date: November 21, 2007

Yes global warming seems to be happening. or so that prick gore tells us.

i havent noticed it getting hotter.

in fact the hottest year was 1998, 10 years ago huh, so what are we approaching an iceage?

anyhow i like the message and the character.

I will adress the people. Ethenal is a environmental and economic catastrophe.

to make ethanol wed have to plowdown rainforests, forests and wetlands

destroying the animals and environment you ethanol lovers wanna protect.

Its cost is nuts and is a net negative economically.

ethanol is bullshit.

Global Warming Im 50% sure is bullshit

The earth goes through trends. 40 years ago, melting the icecaps were encouraged cause we thought we were in a cooling faze (we were in fact)

but algores ignorant. And his leftist followers are morons. who never heard of the global cooling crisis back in the 70s.

I mean that concert he threw for GW awareness. what a dick. THE LAST THING THE WORLD NEEDS IS ANOTHER CONCERT.

Watch penn and tellers bullshit. check out the internet skeptics site.

these guys dig for facts. find real scientists with real studies. And further more unlike the politics who tell us to either save the world or make more money,

these guys passionately work and study the facts.

Remember politics arent scientists. And A failed polition like Al fucking Gore is certainly not a scientist. Hes just a loser who cant step down from the public eye gracefully.

If i were him id shut up cause hes really getting annoying now. Scaring our naive citizens cause he doesnt want his 15 minutes of fame to end

Score: 6

"not bad here is some constructive criticism."

submission: Dual Arms: Precipice

date: November 20, 2007

first off your choice in music. FFX to zanarken?
well its a cool tune but as of now it is so overused its not funny. that soaks your originality.

on the scene where it zooms out from the train. it is disperportionate to the rest of the environment. nothing big just ruins what could be a good scene.

the japanese kanji. I gotta ask. did you use japanese font and simply type " dual arms" with it. if so that title kanji is more than likely incorrect.

also the obscure text being used. (japanese kanji probably), do you understand it yourself. Probably not right?
So maybe not do the japanese text. It can look cool but in this case it was tacky.

The rest is decent. Nothing i can criticise directly. Just keep practicing.
and maybe change your username. to something other than RPGsROK. just me being picky, take no offense. Keep it as is. Just try to develop a more recognisable name. thats all

good times.

yours truely Dizimz

Score: 0

"submit to youtube but not here"

submission: :Blobs 2- pt1 NightBrawl:

date: November 20, 2007

Im sorry this sites for FLASH animations not movies.

Im sure soem was flash but youre invading our territory. Dont.

Score: 1

"well ill tell ya this. The whole emo scene is old"

submission: Alex as Emo

date: November 20, 2007

Im sure you know what obvious flaws there are so i wont rub your face in it.

while there was moderate thought into this its too little too late.
What i mean is the emo make fun of scene is old now. Sure theyre still annoying but get with the times thats all.

Now as for real criticism the artwork was ridiculously sketchy, not sure if that was the point.

I see some techniques used like the letter reading animation. BUT it was kinda ruined by the over sketchy art.

As a tip, out line smooth lines in black or really dark colours. REALLY dark.

anyhow dont give up good luck next time

Score: 10

"Awesome ive been saying this for years"

submission: How 2 Succeed on NG

date: November 19, 2007

just never thought to make a cartoon about it.

I know Ive gotten people saying im unoriginal, than i ask them a for suggestions.
what do i get? "how about a toad or snake summon like in naruto"

naru-fucking-to... What i just quoted was the very definition of unoriginal.

Now off my rant. This could have standed to be better animated or drawn, but so could anything. The art and animation served the poin and I stay firm on the fact that graphics deserve a 9/10 here.

The voicing was decent and also served the cause. I only ask if you could make it somewhat louder. small request.

And the humor, its decently funny and again points out what has driven me nuts for years. good job

ironically 80% of the people who voted 5 on this were probably the fat anime dorks you have been pretty much making fun of the whole time.

anyhow this is 4.5/5 material. But since there is no 4.5 button i rounded up to 5.

I hope that in the future You adress other issues.

but i love the stand point. Cant stand working for months on a game that gets a mere 3.7/5 than have someones week of work surpass it cause it makes popculture references to whatever anime or game is popular at the time.

one finally thought. DUDE the gay ass face curve.... I agree whole heartedly and have been put into propetual states of WHAAA by it.

Score: 6

"Huh , that last review didnt attack anyone"

submission: Yugi!...oh...

date: April 5, 2006

I am not sure who said what but pease get better audio
I couldnt really understand things and please draw your animations better , you had a goood little cartoon thats for sure

Maybe you made it a little late , like 3 or 4 years ago would have worked great because I think yugioh is off the air now , for good reason too such a crapppy overdramatic show I mean OVERDRAMATIC!!!!!

and I know you can agree , but whats worse is people still attempt pokemon paradies pokemon rocked give em a break come freaking on sure its cheesit but hey its one of nintendo's biggest profit source

Now that I am done ranting , I know you can improve hope to see more just please work on the audio

PS it isnt expensive to fix audio if you can afford flash , you can afford a 30 dollar mic who ever said good audio is expensive

Ciao

Score: 4

"damnit"

submission: Autumn Leaves

date: March 8, 2006

You just used FU2's main theme before I got to , I knew that winter should not have submitted so soon

Anyhow it was some what cool(now I am talking about your cartoon) but its really incomplete , you could have had something if only you didnt make it so damn short and compress the audio next time , there was way too much load for this short clip

Score: 2

"it pains me to see poor quality"

submission: ButtMastas VIII

date: February 11, 2006

Its not that I dont like you , Its not that I dont like your cartoon
its the fact that uh hmmm

well tell me you didnt honestly expect a high rating right? the graphics were choppy oh who am I kidding the graphics were horrid (just being honest) and well is this not a direct insult to another cartoon ? thats not right
your lucky that this has a low score because , who ever it was that made "all NG fags must die" would tear on you instantly

Id say keep up the good and hard work but its not hard to bitch about other peoples work

overall you get points for almost nothing

come on man come on
Its bad enough that Ill will gets away with the rants
( I am not saying that foamy is bad either) just saying that flash cartoons that are not fully animated dont deserve full credit